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    My "Pudding Haiku"

    Kuro
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    Post  Kuro Thu Apr 29, 2010 7:00 pm

    My "Pudding Haiku" Pudding

    Haiku dalam puding:

    "Wake up little life
    Morning dew sent you water
    Give to drink your leaves"



    NB: ceritanya tentang awal mula suatu kehidupan, di mana dia harus bertahan hidup bersama alam karena dia lahir dari alam dan hidup untuk (eksistensi) alam ^^


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    Bubub Clone
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    Post  Bubub Clone Sat May 01, 2010 10:27 pm

    Haiku-nya oke Very Happy
    itu puisi Jepang yang pake pola 5-7-5 itu kan ?
    kalo di nopel2, translate-nya kadang suka jadi aneh..

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